I think my poetry revisions are turning me into a nut case.
I just spent 10 minutes trying to get a line right, one freaking line, and my problems all fell to one "the" which I wanted to delete because it would make my line look better but couldn't because it would sound weird.
This was after spending 15 minutes thinking of a word to rhyme with "driven."
By the end of this I will have completely lost it, I think.
Do not do revisions all in two days!
2 comments:
What'd you end up using for the rhyme? Shriven? :)
In the final version, I used "threaten" which sort of is a sketchy end rhyme, but it works.
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